After moving through the writing process, students were asked to reflect on their own work in hopes that the process of reflection will help them become better learners.
Here is Janine's epilogue from beginning to end.
The Popplet
The First Draft
Comments for Janine's Writing
Janine's Second Draft
Janine's Final Draft
Reflection:
After reading your own work, think about then comment on the following. What you like about your writing? What would you change if you did it again? What did you learn from doing this assignment?
What a transformation in Janine's writing! Such a great example of how to use feedback to improve your work! I would love to share this on the main school blog so everyone can see the amazing things our students at Sagonaska are doing!
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